Skypaw of Skyclan

[Clawpaw]

Name: Skypaw
Age: 12 Moons
Gender: Male
Pelt and Fur: Brownish with a speck of white on his forehead.
Eyes: Green
Tail: Long
Markings: Born with a cloud shaped spot on his forehead.
Picture:
Personality: Peppy
Mate/Kits: NA
Golden Word In the Rules: Patience
Clan: Skyclan
Kin: Born from Kittypet
Rank: Apprentice
History-Kit: Is was a pesky kit and is now ready for a pprentice... All he needs is a mentor...
History-Apprentice: NA... Yet.
History-Warrior: NA
History-Other: Was born in New- Leaf
Loner, Rouge or Kittypet or Clan Cat: Clan Cat
Other: Was born in Winter

[Cloudstone]

This wasn't accepted.

[Clawpaw]

Sept 25, 2008 18:47:10 GMT -5 Cloudstone said:

This wasn't accepted.

Why? Do I need to be descriptive?

[Cloudstone]

1. You posted it in the wrong place.
2. It's tooooo short, even by the standards here.
3. It's SKYClan. In the books, No cat is allowed to have their name begin like the clans. I'm sure it is like this here too.

I'm sorry, But you'll have to remake it in the Enter board where you got the form.

[Clawpaw]

Sept 25, 2008 19:11:58 GMT -5 Cloudstone said:

1. You posted it in the wrong place.
2. It's tooooo short, even by the standards here.
3. It's SKYClan. In the books, No cat is allowed to have their name begin like the clans. I'm sure it is like this here too.

I'm sorry, But you'll have to remake it in the Enter board where you got the form.

Oh. I'm sorry...

[Cloudstone]

No need to be sad, I know everyone hates it when they're told their bio is wrong. I won't be rude to you unless I'm mad, And I just want to help. Do your best! ^^

[Mint]

You made a simple mistake in posting in the wrong place =)
You also should look at what the expectations are. Please also note you need to start as a kit to be an apprentice. I'm moving this to the right place.